Saturday, 23 May 2015

Flash Fiction: Send

I've seen a few competitions with a Flash Fiction category and really like the sound of it. The requirements are a story of either 100 words or 250 words and I've attempted an entry, unfortunately it is 500 words long and I'm struggling to cut it down. It is also my first attempt at science fiction. Here is is...

Send - By Katie May Shipley


Clara left Mark in bed and made her usual way up the mountainside. She paused to take in the lichen encrusted stonewalls, the twisted oak trees and looked out across the mountain range that surround her. When she came to Blaenau 30 years ago she had not expected to fall so completely for the landscape, the language and Mark. She had put off making her decision for over ten years now and it was finally time. Clara continued along the winding path towards the woods that she had arrived at all that time ago; the same trees stood but were further bent and creaking. They bowed down onto the hood of her vehicle.
She had been compiling her report since arrival; it had started as simple as the last job. Regular sample updates, increasing pollution levels, assessment of natural resources. To begin with nothing had been right, she was ready to leave after 5, then 10, then 15 years but something made her stay. She had left behind a failed marriage and Mark had picked her up, made her smile and she had allowed herself to see a future, one that belonged in this beautiful place. If only she could tell him the truth.
Clara entered the now ancient aerodyme, she flicked on the computer deck and re-read both reports. The first said pollution levels were still too low, that there was no point continuing investigations. If she sent it life could continue as it was, she could go back and curl up in bed with Mark, destroy the aerodyme and enjoy the welsh countryside for the rest of her life. The second report read the truth, air pollution levels had reached an all time high and the earth’s atmosphere was suitable for a scouting party. It would lead to a series of invasions and ultimately the destruction of everything she now cared for. She would be sent away to the next planet to begin more research and would be left with only memories of this place. The survival of her species lay in her hands.
Her finger hovered over the button when she heard footsteps approaching; the familiar slow steps meant only one person. She rushed out to disguise the aerodyme and to greet him with a distracting hug. As she wrapped her arms around him she decided she had nothing to lose, nothing she wasn’t going to lose anyway.  He listened as she spoke. Shocked at first, but patient. Did he think she was mad? He didn’t run away, he wasn’t afraid, he said nothing and hugged her again. He held her close; she felt safe and warm and then something else.
A pain, a dizziness, she stumbled away from him as her blood soaked her clothes and dripped off his knife. He silently watched her fold to the floor, ignoring her gasps and pleading hands. He turned to the computer desk, easily navigated the complicated system, he clicked send.
There would be no invasion, but there would be no future either.

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